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2008-03-04, 22:13
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Vanishing System - Avsked
Here is a new song. Comments would be nice 
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2008-03-04, 23:17
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i dont have gp5 so i cant give feedback, but is avsked supposed to be an english word?
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2008-03-05, 15:24
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i dont have gp5 so i cant give feedback, but is avsked supposed to be an english word?
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Can upload it in gp4 No its a swedish word. |
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2008-03-05, 15:26
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There it is in gp4 also  |
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2008-04-15, 20:09
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I liked it, as it reminded me of some old Kalmah in some parts, some Katatonia, Anathema, and of course Edge of Sanity. I'm wondering why there are no positive/negative comments here that was a decent effort.
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2008-09-29, 19:59
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Originally Posted by Cribriform_Fortis
I liked it, as it reminded me of some old Kalmah in some parts, some Katatonia, Anathema, and of course Edge of Sanity. I'm wondering why there are no positive/negative comments here that was a decent effort.
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I'm glad that you liked it.
Yeah, not many replies here. |
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2008-09-29, 22:29
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I'll give it a listen as soon as I get my own internet connection working again. Though it might be a tad interesting for an outsider to see what might happen were I to download gp and a bunch of files for it on one of the university's computers... well no, I'll just wait.
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2008-09-30, 09:32
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It's been some time, has this been recorded yet?
Not bad at all, though I'd try to smooth out the switches between the distorted and clean parts and perhaps develop the ending a bit further. Those parts feels a bit sudden.
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2008-09-30, 18:11
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I don't particularly care for the style, but the composition is definitely good. I agree that it might be good to smooth out those transitions; not at the intro so much as the transition to and from the acoustic in between the solos. Other than that it was composed very well.
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2008-09-30, 21:13
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Originally Posted by Chris Rezendes
I don't particularly care for the style, but the composition is definitely good. I agree that it might be good to smooth out those transitions; not at the intro so much as the transition to and from the acoustic in between the solos. Other than that it was composed very well.
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Okey thanks for the feedback! I like the transitions in this song actually But it's good to know what other people think about it too! |
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2008-09-30, 21:17
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Originally Posted by Amadeus
It's been some time, has this been recorded yet?
Not bad at all, though I'd try to smooth out the switches between the distorted and clean parts and perhaps develop the ending a bit further. Those parts feels a bit sudden.
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I don't really feel that way about the transisions from the dist parts to the clean parts. But i agree with you that the end need more development and that have been done, as you said it was a very long time since i posted this here =) This shit will soon be recorded!
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