Just thought I'd share some of my compositions with you guys for some critique.

First off is a really old DM tune I wrote for a project. Kinda influenced by Amorphis back then, and it's pretty simple.

http://213.114.243.220/grunt.gp4

Second one can be found here: http://www.myspace.com/darknightmoonshadow

It's a band recording with vocals and everything. Recorded it pretty quickly at a rehearsal. Keyboards and drums are unfortunately MIDI. I was trying to mix death metal and doom metal with this project (yeah the name is cheesy and was meant as a joke-project at first, but we decided to try and do it more seriously in the end)

And heres a few really old thrash tunes.

http://213.114.243.220/thrash1.gp4
http://213.114.243.220/thrash2.gp4

Intro of the first one is kinda ripped off from my favourite thrash tune.

Just finished a new song...

http://www.requiemsofrepulsion.com/untitled.mp3

GP export as I'm too shitty and lazy to record.

Not the most original stuff. Just felt kinda inspired to do some FF / all those meshuggah clone bands (whom all rule btw) stuff. Pretty simple.

Uploaded a new version here if anyones interested: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=760623